Saturday, November 20, 2004
Mueller Posts! Woo hoo!
Hey everyone,
Here's an update on where we're at. I went through everyone's blog and posted some comments. If you don't see your name below, that means that your blog looks good (easy to read, easy to post comments, etc.) and your Johnny Tremain entries are good (you have all 5, the entries are long enough). If your name is shown below, there's some problem. One thing I was told by Mr. Anderson is that you can't have your last name on your blog, so if you do, you'll have to fix that. The things below aren't big problems, just areas to work on for the next book, The Witch of Blackbird Pond. And I don't ever intend to be insulting to anyone, so if your name is below, it's not a bad thing, just my observation about what would make your blogs better. Everyone's doing a good job, even Champ. Hahaha, just kidding, Champ.
- Anne B--Blog is hard to read because of the background and I don't know how many posts you have because it's hard to read.
- Caitlin B--Entries should be longer (100 words is expected)
- Erika B--Can't have last name on your blog
- Brian B--Can't have last name on your blog
- Andrew C--Can't have last name on your blog; only 2 Johnny Tremain entries
- Taylor C--Only 4 Johnny Tremain entries
- Margaret C--What language are you writing in? IM-speak? Also, I think your most recent posts are on Tom Sawyer and should be on The Witch of Blackbird Pond.
- Shawna D--Only 4 Johnny Tremain entries
- Amanda E--Only 4 Johnny Tremain entries
- Chris F--Only 1 Johnny Tremain entry
- Brenna G--Entries weren't 100 words, try to make them longer for The Witch of Blackbird Pond.
- Jacque H--Only 1 Johnny Tremain entry
- Hana K--Can't have last name on your blog
- Alan L--Can't have last name on your blog
- Stephanie O--Last two Johnny Tremain entries were a bit short
- Katie O--Text is black on black background and needs to be highlighted to see. Someone without any computer skills might not be able to figure out how to read it.
- posted by Mueltrain @ 5:48 PM
